HW unit 2

He writes in the quote, "they were tougher, more ruthless, than we were" by Norman Podhortz. I dont think much needs to change about how he incorperated the quote into his text. He properly talked about the author and the context of the essay which he was quoting and then he backed up the quote with more of the passage that he was pulling the information from. he addsthe next part of the passage to adapt it to . What he could of done better was then explained why he felt black men were a main character in "New York mugging literature," to make it more personal to his point.